Feedback from all groups

Positive:

"you used a variety of shots including match-on-action, close ups, high angle shot and you never revealed the characters face which i liked"

"I like the titles, the music you picked for the beginning is a lot better than the original. The ending is very effective"

"'Vengeance' title with the type-writer effect + sound"

"Titles are brill. Well edited and engaging"

"I like the use of panning around the setting I also like the unknown sense with only the feet being shown while walking"

"I liked how the lighting and music added a really good slow pace, which made it really dramatic"

"Camerawork - of looking down on the feet + match on action shots"

"Maintains an eerie atmosphere"

"Camerawork was good --> match on action"

"Nice use on match-on-action and nice saturation of the footage"

"I like the shot where the camera followed the characters feet to where the place he was going"

"I like use of the shots"

"The music is good as it helps you realise that the thriller is about someone remembering someone and adds to the tense atmosphere"

"I like the titles at the beginning there is movement and they are introduced very well with sounds"

"I like the use of keeping everything black and white which makes the piece look darker and more intense."

Improvement:

"The photographs could be a bit clearer, also the first scene seems to go on too long. The scene where the camera pans around the room is a bit pointless."

"In the second scene the shot is a bit pointless going back and forth."

"The change in music could have been more linked and flowed better"

"Not so sure about the choice of music and the pan shot is a little jumpy."

"It doesn't give an insight to the storyline at all not giving the viewer much information"

"Music didn't really go with the filming"

"Slightly unrealistic having an unattended crime scene in a bedroom"

"Lighting was spelt incorrectly, Victim has very small legs"

"The music doesn't really fit together (titles --> film) ((however music's really good though!)"

"Maybe add more shots so we see the characters face, or victim as the viewer could switch off during the clip"

"i think the music could build up to make it more dramatic and build up tension more and i think the ending could be improved"

"I think the ending is a bit boring and confusing and didn't really have a plot"

"It ends too suddenly, maybe use a long fade with a title at the end so it doesn't end too suddenly"