Editing: I like the titles. The first scene feels a bit long. Then the pace of the next couple of scenes goes a bit faster. The match on action scene is very good although the main character holds on to the door handle a bit too long.
Camerawork: This film uses a variety of shots. It starts with a high angle shot of the pictures. I think you should include more shots from different angles maybe some close ups of the pictures that are more important to the narrative so we can see them better and focus on the story line. The film then cuts to a panning of a bedroom this is quite good but seems a bit out of place. Then there's a shot of someone's feet as they are walking; This is a very good shot to introduce to the story and character. The next shot is very good because it uses match on action. You could have used a wider variety of shots and shot angles to make the film more effective and dynamic!
Mise en scene: The lighting on the first scene isn't very good and you can't quite see what is in the scene. Maybe you could use some colour correction to make it brighter so the audience can see the pictures. The prop you used of the outline of the girl is very good and adds a huge twist to the film making it an exiting thriller. I like the titles.
Sound: The film seems like quite a dark film yet the soundtrack you have used seems very happy and fast paste in contrast to what was happening. If I were to edit this film I would have put the same orchestral music type but at a much much slower paste.
Thriller conventions: You never see the main characters identity which makes the intro even more mysterious and look more like a thriller. The unrealistic storyline and the abnormal situations this intro gives to these characters make the viewer interested and want to know what happens next.
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ReplyDeleteEditing: I like the titles. The first scene feels a bit long. Then the pace of the next couple of scenes goes a bit faster. The match on action scene is very good although the main character holds on to the door handle a bit too long.
ReplyDeleteCamerawork: This film uses a variety of shots. It starts with a high angle shot of the pictures. I think you should include more shots from different angles maybe some close ups of the pictures that are more important to the narrative so we can see them better and focus on the story line.
The film then cuts to a panning of a bedroom this is quite good but seems a bit out of place.
Then there's a shot of someone's feet as they are walking; This is a very good shot to introduce to the story and character. The next shot is very good because it uses match on action.
You could have used a wider variety of shots and shot angles to make the film more effective and dynamic!
Mise en scene: The lighting on the first scene isn't very good and you can't quite see what is in the scene. Maybe you could use some colour correction to make it brighter so the audience can see the pictures.
The prop you used of the outline of the girl is very good and adds a huge twist to the film making it an exiting thriller. I like the titles.
Sound: The film seems like quite a dark film yet the soundtrack you have used seems very happy and fast paste in contrast to what was happening. If I were to edit this film I would have put the same orchestral music type but at a much much slower paste.
Thriller conventions: You never see the main characters identity which makes the intro even more mysterious and look more like a thriller. The unrealistic storyline and the abnormal situations this intro gives to these characters make the viewer interested and want to know what happens next.